Guest Posted August 10, 1999 Report Share Posted August 10, 1999 Hi, I decided to try my hand at writing, and so I completed chapter one of the short story "Loyalties" in all there will be about 4 chapters. I've tried to write about the BC universe from a different prespective. I welcome any comments and suggestions you may have about it.So I hope you all enjoy it. Karl Wolf http://www.members.tripod.com/blade10/loyalties.htm Note: This is my first writing project and there are bound to be typos and irregularities but try to over look them. [This message has been edited by Ron Wallin (edited 08-10-99).] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Badgerius Posted August 10, 1999 Report Share Posted August 10, 1999 A good start. I liked the grenade. "Is that a grenade in your pants or are you just happy to see me?" BTW are your Lt. O'Neil and my Lt. Commander O'Neil (see Eternal Diligence) related? Cousins, perhaps?------------------ Commander Badgerius, GCV Diligence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 13, 1999 Report Share Posted August 13, 1999 Nice story man! Let us know when the next chapter is up :-)------------------ Fleet Commander Daniel "Tac" Londono GCV Usagi =Wraith Fleet= "Hard,Fast, Furious...FIRST!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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