johnnie Posted November 13, 2006 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 Sorry! The next section I will use double space. Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnnie Posted November 17, 2006 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 Fleet Commander Jonathan Mayfield had taken no steps to rearm and repair the fleet. The entire docking ring was full of ships. Some were fully repaired while others were about to explode. And all of the stationÔÇÖs repair materials were spread equally among the ships docked. Gardna had to personally see to the removal of the repaired ships from the station and the docking of the heavy damaged ships and the medical ships. His fleet would be ready for the attack. His door to his office beeped. ÔÇ£Come in.ÔÇØ Kevin came walking in carrying a stack of datapadds that touched his chin. ÔÇ£Here are the ship status reports you asked for, the Galactic Command fleet reports, and some paper work you have to fill out.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Just lay them on the coffee table.ÔÇØ Kevin dropped them on the table causing them to scatter all over the table. Kevin then jumped on the couch and stretched out. ÔÇ£By all means, have a seat.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Thanks, you know, on the way here I started thinking about the Antigone.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Oh? What about?ÔÇØ ÔÇ£I was thinking about Carla, Corey, Marcus, Danielle and the rest of them. Their helm must not have been responding. How they just plowed into that other ship. They must have seen it coming and couldnÔÇÖt do anything about it.ÔÇØ Gardna stopped working. ÔÇ£They arenÔÇÖt dead,ÔÇØ said Gardna almost as a whisper. ÔÇ£What?!ÔÇØ Kevin jumped up. ÔÇ£Antigone cloaked before she hit the other ship.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£But the other ship exploded.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Before they collided, I transported a missile into the Gammulan shipÔÇÖs reactor. That is what destroyed it.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£If the Antigone cloaked, where is it?ÔÇØ ÔÇ£I sent it on a mission, to convince the Zelons and Credians to help us. The Empirians and Vesperons wonÔÇÖt help us, and the Terran race canÔÇÖt survive under this brutal assault alone.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Why havenÔÇÖt you told anyone? This sort of info would be a major morale boost.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£What would happen if the Gammulans destroyed the Credians, Zelons, Kandorians and Mandorians on their way here? What if AntigoneÔÇÖs cloak failed and they were destroyed?ÔÇØ ÔÇ£You are as always right. That is why you wear the command pips.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Can you hand me the Galactic fleet charts?ÔÇØ Kevin looked around through the datapadds until he found it. ÔÇ£Here,ÔÇØ he said as he threw it to Gardna. Gardna caught it with one hand. ÔÇ£According to this, the entire Galactic Fleet, if we use every ship from medical to military we will have, 1245. According to the probes we would still be out numbered 3 to 1.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£They will control Earth by Friday,ÔÇØ said Kevin solemnly. ÔÇ£Not if I command.ÔÇØ Gardna got up and walked over to the prone Kevin on the couch. He kissed him ever so gently on the lips. ÔÇ£I do have one more assignment for you.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Urgh,ÔÇØ said Kevin as he rolled over. ÔÇ£This is the last one, after this you can go sleep wherever you want.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£QuÔÇÖest-ce que tu veux maintenant ?ÔÇØ ÔÇ£I want you to set up a conference call with the other fleet commanders.ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Last thing?ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Last thing, thanks.ÔÇØ Gardna got up and went back to his desk. Kevin rolled his eyes at Gardna, but he kept working. Kevin got up and left. Gardna had a devilish smile on his face as Kevin left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnnie Posted June 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 Wow its been too long since I've posted anything else to this story. In case you were wondering I've still been writing it and i'm on page 88 now. I'll be adding some more either tonite or tmmrw. ttyl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BC_Vet Posted July 19, 2007 Report Share Posted July 19, 2007 Kewl story, but ur formating hurts the eyes. Here is pretty much the standard for BC RP (just my opinion, as there are alot of really good BC RPs). Double space paragraghs and dialogue...and/or whatever compliments the ease of reading comprehension and immersion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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