Kalshion Posted October 10, 2004 Report Posted October 10, 2004 Hey all 3 years ago a friend of mine and I completed a story, we havn't had time to correct the spelling errors in this story but where hoping everything is ok I'd like some opinions on the story itself (pos and neg, but no remarks saying "The spelling is bad" and such) I'll be listing two links The first is a link to the website that contains some information, and a PDF to download The second link is to the story page that's on a website A few thing's from both myself, and Paul (the 2nd author) 1. Please do not sell this PDF or the story 2. Please do not take credit for this story, we have more than enough evidence to support that this story is made by US and owned by US If you can comply with these requests, then feel free to read the story Yokosha Story Page Yokosha Information page Again, any comments or opinion's are welcome, but no harsh comments that insult either myself or the other author please
Quazar Posted October 11, 2004 Report Posted October 11, 2004 I skimmed through Yokosha and I'm impressed, Kalshion - as I am with Twilight Hour. Are you planning on finishing that one? BTW, I have replied to your Private Message (on a different topic).
Kalshion Posted October 12, 2004 Author Report Posted October 12, 2004 You did? Hmmm, I never got an e-mail, nor is it present in my PM box Ya know what? I got so busy around that month that I completely forgot about it... hehe, I will read it again and see if I can try and revive it Thanks Quazar
Quazar Posted October 12, 2004 Report Posted October 12, 2004 You didn't receive it? OK, I'll fire it off again, with your original message. Yeah, even if Aidan Tylier and Elio Jason are not available, you can still write them in or have them get reasigned. Then you can finish sorting out the different "factions" of Galcom. Getting back on topic, I plan to read your Yokosha in full soon.
Kalshion Posted October 12, 2004 Author Report Posted October 12, 2004 Ok thanks Just a head's up, I've talked to Paul and we both have agree'd to create a sequal to this.. thing is, another story take's between this one and the sequal The sub story (as I call it) is currently being written, Paul will post it up once I get the file to him (I hate work sometimes) Look for a title to show up called Matsudai Yuusai (forever Dominance) - Title of the sequal The title for the sub-story is undecided..
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