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  1. Sorry, just came out of coma :-D


    Maddox lifted his head, trying to ignore the ounding ache, dulling his thoughts. He tried to force his yes to focus, but they couldn't. Finally he reralized hat was wron and asked to no one "Where are my contacts?"

    "Over there. On the counter"

    A voice said in his ear, making him jump.

    "DON'T DO THAT!" He yelled as he fell out of bed.

    A blurry figure helpd him upand over to his contacts. As he placed them in, his headache grew worse. The pain was nauseating. He slowly slumped to the floor as his knees gave way, and cluthed his head helplessly.

    "Here, take these"

    Maddox gratefully accepte the two pills offered to him and tok them. Instantly the pain receded until it was nothing but a slight twinge in the back of his head. He lookedup and recognized Jo.

    "Now what?" He asked.

    "We wait" Was her answer, it was just the answer he had expected. Then he remembered Smith, still plugged in, he didn't even know that there had been sabotuers on board. Maddox would wake him later and inform him. Yes, he'd wake Smith eventually. Maddox thought back over his lost ship, his dead crew, the new Harkrader floating around somewhere out there, with someone who shouldn't be ather helm. Maddox sighed, not really over anything, but over life itself. One moment he was on top of the world, next in line for a promotion, but then he was flung out into deep space, collided wih a transport, which jumped in rigt on top of him, Maddox wondered what ever happened to that ship..........

    "Yeah" he replied. "We wait"

  2. I have a few things to say (I'm sure you care )

    1. I hate the capital ships. I mean c'mon a flying duck??? And if you look at them they all have a giant "duck beak"

    2. I still have Freespace 1 on my comp.

    (useless bit of info.)

    3. I look forward to playing this game...even though I HATE the cap. ships. I mean it has been sooooo long till I got a good space sim. BC3K was a good one, along with Freespace 1. I haven't played FS 2 though. Well that's just my opion on this whole situation.

  3. Good one!


    Maddox walked over the bridge examining the controls, then Huber walked over and went into Jo's office. Maddox went over and peered at his workstation. There was a simple little phrase on it. Obviously this message had been intercepted and decyphered by Jo's people, And Maddox was about to open it when his world turned into darkness and he fell to the floor a knot at the back of his head.


    sorry I am short on time =)

    Well......what sould I do, If Caine is going to be gone...that's going to put a dampener on this thread....any ideas??

    [ 08-29-2001: Message edited by: BCFreak13 ]

  4. Well I just might stir things up....not in a bad way though...


    "I accept the responsibilities. However when we get Ken back, and I promise I will, or die trying, I will have to go back to GalCom. I am the head of that station that you see,"

    At this Maddox pointed to Genisis Station that was just coming around from the shadow of the moon, its white plating gleaming in the sunlight.

    "I know everything there is to know about that station. When you picked me up I was just going there for the first time as the head of that station. I can't abandon her, but I can't abandon you either in your time of need. So here I will stay, for the moment. Now about that radiation......If we could get everyone off of the personnel quarters on deck 4, we could use the back-up life support ducts to suck all the radiation to that part of the ship. It won't hold it there for long....maybe an hour, maybe less. But I think it might give us enough time to find Ken. If it doesn't then We'll go to plan B, as soon as I think of one."

    Maddox smiled at the woman who was slightly smaller than him, but considerably braver than him. Maddox then walked out onto the bridge and over to the turbelift. He went down to deck 3. He then proceeded into his quarters and sat on his bed to think.

    An hour later a marine saw Maddox enter engineering, he looked like he was a man on a mission....


    I like wht you did on your last post Caine....it was....insirational?

  5. No I'll forget the password....


    Smith what is the password to get in my quarters again???[/RP]

    He he he

    That's fine with me. 'Cause when we get Multiplayer going then We will need to keep Insurgent Scum (No Offence Rattler) out of here. I just don't want them spying on our tactics........Just My Peice Of Mind....

    [ 08-25-2001: Message edited by: BCFreak13 ]

  6. OMG I totally skipped that post. I'll be at Genisis in a bit. I was on vacation and I totally skipped that page of posts......How embarrassing

    (By the Way how should my sig look?? I know I know I know nothing, but hey at least I ask )

    [ 08-25-2001: Message edited by: BCFreak13 ]

  7. [RP]

    Maddox had finally talked the Medic into letting him be discharged. He walked around Jo's office as he waited for her to come and tell him why she had summoned him. He looked at all the decorative knifes scattered around the room. There was a specific one that caught his eye though. It wasn't anything fancy, but it was the only case that was easily acessable. Inside there was a simple Stainless Steel (a rare commodity in these days ) knife with a Mother of Pearl handle. Not as gaudy as some of the other knifes in this room but still a fins specimin of a knife. Maddox carefully opened the lid of the case, and gingerly picked up the knife with his handkerchief, not knowing if Jo would be mad if he got fingerprints on it. He studied the finely sharpened blade. The serrated edge giving the knife a nomadic look. Maddox then noticed the fine inscribing done on the hilt. It simply read

    "To my darling Kenneth, I give you this knife in recognition of our love to each other. This knife is modled after one my father had many years ago. It saved him from the most terrible situations, I hope it has the same effect for you. Your darling, Jo"

    Maddox simply stared at this symbol of true love. He then carefully placed the knife back in its case. He thought to himself, Even though this Kenneth must know that this is definitely not the most expensive knife in here. It must be his personal favorite. I admire him for being able to win the love of this woman who it took me two weeks just to earn her trust.Maddox then turned around to see Jo walk through the door. She looked from the knife to Maddox, back to the knife then she opened her mouth as if to say something, but she just closed it again and broke down into sobs.


    I just thought this would help us to remember that this story isn't fully fun and games, that the relationship of these people hang in the balance.

  8. Mind if I take a shortcut??


    Maddox crawled through the crawlspace and listened as Jo rattled off the coordinates of the man, Section 32 Tube 35-B. Alex crawled to tube 35-A and looked for sensors that would alert the intruder to Maddox's location. He saw one. He quietly put the trigger to the lock off door to key to his communicator. He went the long way around to the other access place, there was another sensor. Maddox thought slowly about his options. Then he shut the door at the other end with his comm. Then he drew the two Compression Pistols, and popped in a new cartridge on both before crawling into the access panel. He set off the alarm intemtionally. He heard scuttling moving away from him. Maddox then went into the corridor and shut the lockdown door. Preventing any escape. Maddox then went further in until he saw the foot of the intruder. He didn't care about the foot, but what was on it. Heavy Armor. Maddox pressed a bottun on his Panel Armor that made a helmet portrude from the back plate and covered up Maddox's head. Maddox the took aim and shot the cable which gave power to the crawlspace lights. The Night Vision kicked in automatically and Maddox saw the Intruder whip around, but he had no helmet Maddox ducked as the intruder fired off a shot to try to gain some light. Then Maddox started pumping the triggers on the pistols sending round after round pulsing into the man's cheast and when that wouldn't work. He shot the man in the head sufficently killing him. Maddox then spoke into his Comm. "Jo? This is Maddox I got the last of 'em. I am stuck in tube 35-B. If you would open the doors for me.."


    Aren't I good??

  9. Oohhh good one


    Maddox quickly lobbed a flash granade into the middle of the room and squeezed his eyes shut. The resulting blast blinded Jo as well as the intruders, Maddox flipped a switch in the cabinet restoring power, he shot the first intruder between the eyes. The second he unloaded the rest of the right hand gun into him-5 shots in all. The mangled body fell to the floor, clearly dead. Maddox then ran over to Jo and used the hunting knife to cut the roped binding her hands and feet.

    "Glad to see me?"


    Sorry, I would have gone into more detail, but I am short on time today.

  10. Do you want the bois like the folowing?

    NameCommander Alec Maddox

    Ship NameGCV-HarkRader

    Age 28 standard Human Years

    BirthPlaceOn board of his father's ship Jewel of Iscariot in the Gammulan Sector

    HistoryMaddox was enlisted in GalCom at the age of 15, he started out as a Interceptor Pilot on the GCV Slice of Peace

    He then was transferred to the Garid class cruiser Juniper as first officer to his Brother Borsk Maddox. Then he was given his own ship dubbed the HarkRader

    Haircolor Brown

    Eyes Green

    Blood type O+

    Misc. Has a robotic left arm after losing that arm in intercepor crash landing. Has a personal droid that was dubbed Smith after his father, Smith currently serves as Maddox's First Officer

    Did I do it right???

  11. You're evil. I'll take the one in Egineering, I'll use a pistol and that knife.


    Maddox woke up to find that a full stage lockdown was in place. The medic simply said that Jo wanted him out of here A.S.A.P. and he should look for the defectors.

    Maddox got up and looked and the weapons cabinet, maddox grabbed the other rifle, some spare ammo packs, and the hunting knife he strapped to his leg under his pants.

    Minutes later Maddox was in his personal quarters, he gave Smith the rifle and grabbed his two GalCom issue pressure pistols, and the spare packs for them, he hooked the holdsters to his belt, but held onto the guns, he locked his quarters and continued down the hall.

    Maddox got to engineering with little trouble, the lifts wouldn't open for his voice, but he used the sevice shafts instead.

    Maddox was thinking about the key pionts in engineering, when he heard a cuss, it wasn't a Valkery speaking so it wasn't Jo, Maddox took the safeties off his pistols and climbed into the opened acess panel, he saw the rear of a human working on what looked like auxialary bridge controls, Madfdox shot him 5 times with out a single word, and he then threw the body down the 5 stories of service shaft to his demise. Maddox hacked into comm. controls and spoke into the microphone that was present.

    "This is Commander Maddox, I am in service sfaft juncture A-20 and I have killed one of the intruders that was trying to take control of the ship, Can anyone hear me?"

    "This is Comm officer Huber, on perscan we show that one of the intruders has gained acess to engineering and killed all inside, he has nbarred the doors, we need you to get down there and help Jo, we don't know her present status."

    Maddox climbed down the service shaft to Level 4, right over engineering, he checked his ammo and blew a hole in the floor and dropped into the service closet of engineering, he climbed out of the closet and continued into engineering, what he saw made him freeze in his tracks, 15 dead bodies stacked up on the main control panels. Maddox then saw the open door of engineering, Jo's rifle sitting in the doorway, not allowing the automated doors to shut.


    Your turn, this is getting fun, we should continue the storys of these commanders even after Operation GolGatha, just a suggestion but it might be fun

  12. Good i like it


    Maddox was fored to one knee, his head still spinning, he sat there for a moment, just trying to get his head to work, he finally recovered enough to crawl into the turbo lift as the would be kidnapper was frisking Jo, he grabbed the emergency sidearm from its hidden cabinet and aimed it at the head of the attacker, he flipped the setting to wide stun and fired once, both Jo and the attacker went down in a heap, he got up and drug Jo into the lift, He said bridge before the drug took full affect on him, he passed out and his heart slowly stopped beating.


    Save me I don't want to die!!!

  13. Ahhhh chasing me are you??


    Maddox walked down corridor after corridor, tryin' to think where he was going, he passed door after door, all of the sudden, he heard the warning sirings and an electronic voice saying "intruder alert," then the sirins stopped, then they started again, then they stopped. Maddox went down to Engineering to see what was going on, but he smelled the sight before he saw it. There were skeletons every where, rubbed clean from something, Maddox turned on his radiation scanner, but it was broken, he walked into the Engineering doorway, the small dagger he kept hidden under his clothes in his hand. He took a quick glance over the section of ship before him, He then walked in.

    "Maddox?? Maddox, wake up!"

    Maddox came to staring into the deep eyes of Jo, He quickly looked to see where he was. A quick assesment told him he was in his quarters, Smith at his side.

    "What happened?" He asked.

    "A hallocogen, you were hit by a dart saturated in it, it appears we have a sabotuer on board."

    Maddox just stared into those deep eyes, at a loss for words.

    [/RP] Aren't I bad??

    [ 08-09-2001: Message edited by: BCFreak13 ]

  14. [RP]

    Maddox walked around the bridge. He concentrated on what was being asked of him. It was near impossible. We had snuck into GalCom territory, were about an hour from the moon, and we are looking for someone named Caine, supposedly Jo's husband. Maddox just wanted to go home. He missed his GARID cruiser, this transport had no standard armament, it had plenty of non-standard though. And ontop of that Maddox had just given them the ability to scan and passby GalCom ships with out being detected. This was getiing out of hand, and what about these reports of something called Golgotha?? Maddox didn't know half of what was going on, but he did know that he was in way over his head. He stood staring out the meter-thick clear glass and watched as a GARID class ship floated by, the sun glinting off of the new plate armor. Maddox stared at its simplistic beauty, the oversized engines, the two PTA guns, the shuttle launch bay, nothing fancy, but it was Maddox's ship of choice. He glanced at the COMM station, wondering if the ship belonged to a commander he knew, he looked at the ship registry name and did almost a double take when he realized that the name of the ship was Harksrader.

    He turned to Jo and said, "That's my ship. They gave someone my ship, I don't believe it."

    He turned and walked over to the Turbolift, he walked inside and said one word. "Personal Quarters A-17." The computer acknowledged with a solitary beep.


    thought I'd stir things up a little. All the good stuff was settling to the bottom

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