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  1. I agree with Badgerius

    i turned up my sound hoping to find some cool music playing low along with it.

    i dunno what it is but the beginning seems outta place. as i said kinda comical and in a recruitment we want then interested not chuckling

    other wise it is great, im not the best with words so some one else can help you there.

    I could scower the internet for some background music to go along with it, or we could use the BCM theme song, i loved that, and it'll fit in with the theme, we are Galcom

    ooooo!!!!...just had a brain though(very rare )

    It could talk about Prime fleet, and then to end off say

    We are Galcom's First and Last line of defence...

    We are PRIME FLEET.

    what do ya say?

    btw, the ... is to kinda make that line disappear and then the line below appears

    maybe keep ... in if it looks good but can do that poss just the same by having that line fade out and the next line appear

  2. [rp]

    Cmdr Demolition


    "Get a message out to James asking him how repairs are comming, also tell him my probes have spotted some Gammulan vessels heading this way, tell Elio the Gammulan vessels are on the way."-Demolition

    "Yes Sir"-comms officer

    Demolition pondered why the gamms where sending such a small force, he knew they had more that they could send. Was this some clever trap his forcers where being draw into, or or did LordDavid make a serious blunder.

    Demolition thought some more on this and hoped it was the latter, but he doubted it. It's not often the Gams screw up like this, they are a warlike race, war is what they do and the do it well.


    It's a bit short, but it a great bridge....

  3. [rp]

    Cmdr Demolition


    "Sir, incoming transmition from Cmdr Elio"-Comms Officer

    "Put it through"-Demolition

    Demolition read the message twice to make sure he got everything. When he had finished he started issuing his orders.

    "Helm take us to Jupitor"-Demolition

    "Comms tell the rest of the wing Delta Formation, and onward to Jupitor"-Demolition

    "Comms, get a message out to HQ tell em where we're going with who and what supplies we got"-Demolition

    "So, its on to Jupitor to fight along side Elio once again."-Demolition

    "Comms, send a message to Elio asking if he will require our marines for the ground assualt"-Demolition

    In about 3 minutes Epsilon Wing departed Polaris and its home base and went along to Jupitor.

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