Guest Posted August 10, 1999 Report Posted August 10, 1999 Hi, I decided to try my hand at writing, and so I completed chapter one of the short story "Loyalties" in all there will be about 4 chapters. I've tried to write about the BC universe from a different prespective. I welcome any comments and suggestions you may have about it.So I hope you all enjoy it. Karl Wolf http://www.members.tripod.com/blade10/loyalties.htm Note: This is my first writing project and there are bound to be typos and irregularities but try to over look them. [This message has been edited by Ron Wallin (edited 08-10-99).]
Badgerius Posted August 10, 1999 Report Posted August 10, 1999 A good start. I liked the grenade. "Is that a grenade in your pants or are you just happy to see me?" BTW are your Lt. O'Neil and my Lt. Commander O'Neil (see Eternal Diligence) related? Cousins, perhaps?------------------ Commander Badgerius, GCV Diligence
Guest Posted August 13, 1999 Report Posted August 13, 1999 Nice story man! Let us know when the next chapter is up :-)------------------ Fleet Commander Daniel "Tac" Londono GCV Usagi =Wraith Fleet= "Hard,Fast, Furious...FIRST!"
Recommended Posts
Please sign in to comment
You will be able to leave a comment after signing in
Sign In Now