Woah, relax man. What I mean is that you could have put an index in at the back. Because someone who wants to, for example, learn how to assign crew members to different stations wouldn't know to look for the section explaining the tactical computer.
I have read the whole manual by now but I really learned more just by messing around in the roam scenario.
I believe that you put alot of work into the manual. However, I felt as though it was written for someone who is familliar with the battlecruiser series.
PS.In the "Crew Attributes" section, it discusses artificial intelligence, fatigue factor, life factor, dogfighting skill, combat missions, combat kills, and bombing accuracy. Nowhere is hunger factor mentioned.
PPS. You got your 20 bucks for me, so no matter what I say about the manual it's you who gets the last laugh